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The Path Downward

I just have to get it out.....

Your attitude is making me

fall out of love

with you.



You bitch and scream at me constantly.

You tell me to "shut up fuck up"

when i try to help you out,

You do not care that I'd

Do anything for you.

It's not like you

would help me

Anyways.



So go along thinking that you won't lose me

Cause when you least expect it, I will go

Far Far away and never come back to

you and all your torment and emo

woes that you put on my chest

the burdens i must carry

for you, it's not

like i have my

own cross to

carry.





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  • captaincrazy
    January 2, 2008

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    i agree with undying resolution. you don't deserve this at all. you are such a great person. dumb shit people like her don't deserve people like you. :] And when i hear stuff like this, oooooh. it gets me mad. nobody hurts you and gets away with it. anyways, good poem. and don't fret so much about that comic thing. you're going to get it done and handed in on time. And if they actually know true art work, you're going to win too. :]]


    erotic content in this poem? where?


  • Undying Resolution
    January 2, 2008
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    i like the set up of this poem. very nice. I cant really give advice as im not entirely informed on your relationship, but i do feel that she should know what shes doing to you. NO ONE deserves to be treated like that, and if she doesnt like it then fuck her. (sorry)

    <333


  • KrazyKazi
    January 1, 2008

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    I'm with Jello on this, although that seems to be my cure for everything - to just talk it out. But you need to make her listen. and if she gets pissy... then take a deep breath, walk away, relax, and try again later. Compromises always need to be made, even if we wish they didn't even exist. She needs to know that she keeps doin this to you and she needs to know how it makes you feel. Try to talk, but try to refrain from yelling.

  • Paradise Prisoner
    January 1, 2008

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    oh jessie, love can be just a terrible thing, but it endures all. love is forever. the heavy constant pain you carry is a sign, you can't just stop caring, that is not human. talk to her, really talk to her.