diver of unfathomable ocean allying to a sybarite
penetrating essence of plasmic infinite,
mother of love, insane emotions.
stiff, absconding soul's arcades,
a power of strange acoustics,
anxious universe gets upset inside each human thought.
in abstract abyss echoes flood turning over deep ego
from hatred of frightful brains,
restore triumphant calm sphere of cosmos circulation in soul
under embryonic form of dreams.
Author notes
~spiritualangel~
Picture inspiration
A contest entry
- PICTURE PROMPT by penman.
525 points, ended January 3, 2008, 9 entries
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This is good. I may be young and an unexpierenced poet, but in my opinion you kinda overused some really big or complicated words.
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Wow this is a very intense write. I can see why you'd be proud of it.
Beautiful work
Thank you -
lovely poem, and congrats on all hose trophies, and good luck in this contest =)
stephanie -
This is very Good . Congratulations on the Gold Trophy.
Thank you for taking the time to enter this poem into my contest . I wish you the best of luck.
Redwing Spirit
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Gripping phrasing 'a power of strange acoustics'. I love the idea around this and the original prompt works well within it. Some wording seems out of place though but really, is a definite strong and intriguing conception.
Thanks for entering.
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Wow!!!!!!
This is amazing. Brilliant take on the picture. This is a powerful and well crafted piece...
in abstract abyss echoes flood turning over deep ego
from hatred of frightful brains,
Beautiful. Great job! Thank you so much for entering and good luck.
Congratulations on your gold trophy
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congrats... well done...PK
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Wonderful
Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.
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