Exam stress
Revision, revision,
You are such a bore.
Doing revision makes my head sore.
You make me want to scream and roar,
Throw my books down on the floor,
Stamp my feet and slam the door.
I'd rather die than revise some more.
http://allpoetry.com/poem/3070602
Jun 13th '07
Wreck
Salty residue coats the old wood,
Bent and warped with countless voyages,
Forms the shell of a mighty ship,
Heroically it fights the rising waves,
But eventually the battle is lost, for none is as mighty as nature's wrath.
http://allpoetry.com/poem/3758388
December 31st ‘07
A contest entry
- First and Last by CarolDesjarlais.
525 points, ended January 4, 2008, 27 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Oh bravo...what a difference in the wirint from the first and the last one. You ahve really moved to showing rather than telling and you metaphor is a strong one int he second poem. I like your word usage as well. good job.
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