I can feel…
fragrance
as each burst of flame
redefines heart’s inner core
of my soul’s purification.
I can feel…
passion
as fever of dying embers
fashion a garland of eagerness
of my spirit’s delight.
I can feel…
intensity
as smolders linger breathlessly
over heat of suffocating ecstasy
of my body’s excitement.
I can feel…
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Author notes
Option: I can feel
Reason for choice of title:
I choose the title because it immediately appealed to my heart. I also wanted to pen words from the first time go, and write a poem without cognitive ‘poetic’ reasoning. I wanted to express the depth of what I was feeling, and not reasoning.
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A contest entry
- Come and get your title... by Celticjedi.
600 points, ended January 19, 2008, 26 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Very nice babe, but you didn't follow all the rules. You didn't tell me why you chose the title you did (and the link doesn't work.
) I don't want to disqualify this poem because I love it so much, just fix that and I won't have to. 
I agree with roguexzia, the feeling the lines carry is unbelievable. Keep it up, thanks for entering. Happy new year!
~Cj
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And you should continue feeling.. the passion, the fragrance, the intensity of this time called life... Lovely poetry, my South African friend. May the new year find you feeling all its blessings.
~ Nicolette
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Beautiful
I loved the way that this has the short lines, but carry a large amount of feeling. Of course it was only amplified by the line....I can feel... Just a great phrase to write around...... and more so the subject that it surrounds. Great write!!!
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