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First Year

Pool sticks, "Got Dick" shirt
Yeah we had a lot of fun.
Who knew that a smile & a flirt.
Would lead to year one.

A break in, a little black dress
Who knew what we begun.
It was my best year I confess.
It was our year, year one.

We still have more yet to see.
So many things yet to do.
We’ll go together, you and me.
Babe, I can’t wait for year two.

This is happiness I never knew
Our day is finally here
So, I just want to tell you
“HAPPY FIRST YEAR!!”

Author notes

Although this was written on January 1st, it is not a new years poem. It pertains to an anniversary that happens to fall in early January.

Written: January 1st, 2008

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  • scentedrose
    March 24, 2008

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    Tthe 't' is missing from still.
    The background makes the poem quite hard to read.

    It's a very good poem though


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