Crystal patterns on my window,
crafted by an unseen hand.
Lacy cobwebs on the gatepost,
in icy splendour stand.
Little miracles of Winter,
in frozen beauty lie.
A landscape soon forgotten
as the season passes by.
As we wish it all away,
for Spring and Summer's clime.
Just remember Winter's beauty
may not be here, for all time.
A contest entry
- Winter Time by soccer220.
600 points, ended January 10, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Very well Done
You have written a masterpiece here - at least in the first 2 stanzas - the last verse however jumps from winter to summer - the last line could be modified along the lines of an old poet saying "can spring be far behind" or something like that - I think there is beauty in all the seasons and you have penned it well here for winter. keep on keeping on - Bless God - Joe
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Wow, this is great! Your rhyming is very good. The poem is a nice length, and you have a nice thought that you focus on throughout the poem. Thanks for entering and good luck!
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