Miracles
miracle...
each cubic inch of space,
each square metre of surface,
land full of miracles,
each piece God's interior
crowded in miracles.
http://allpoetry.com/poem/show/3218176
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Kiss
storm shakes the night as ocean
infuriated foam in crags
of my solitude, tired meadows
vigil the door to take me.
in darkness, my figure, sliding
near your bed, comes to places secret
with light, gentle kisses, fingers
go through your body slowly
raise a monument, hot and stiff,
tears illuminated lighthouse night
caress, kiss... you're silent.
lips flood in pleasure.
unloadings madness to break through
dams, cables, laws, pleasures inebriant.
http://allpoetry.com/poem/3760322 January 01/2008
Author notes
First: Miracles ( don't know the date)
Last: Kiss
A contest entry
- First and Last by CarolDesjarlais.
525 points, ended January 4, 2008, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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this really does show a change in voice and pen. The first is much less evocative than the first in both ways of writing and theme. ty so much for entering... well done.
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