Snow hasn't fallen,
but cold days abound.
No sign of the sun,
just dampness around.
Bones are all creaking,
with stiffness and pain.
How I long for the sunshine
to bless me again.
I'm in hibernation,
don't want to go out.
I really can't face,
getting frost on my snout.
Just like little hedgehogs,
curled up in tight balls;
Don't want to wake up,
till Spring weather calls!
A contest entry
- Winter Time by soccer220.
600 points, ended January 10, 2008, 13 entries
Silver trophy winner
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Comments
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butiful Ann
it wil be nise when summer is here although i do like all the seasons they all have somefink specil to offer... good luck in the contest xxx cheeky xxx 
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Very good! This is great! Your rhyming is for the most part excellent, the only awkward point is in the second stanza, where "pain" and "again" don't rhyme. Other than that, very good! Thanks for entering and good luck; keep writing!
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great your rhyme sits so easy asalways, i love this hibernation poem good luck xx
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