Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Imagine...the First Time

Missing image

It's what I do

Imagine... 

 the feeling

in a moment worth preserving

when you open the eyes of your heart

that has been tarnished...many years

to see a person for who they are...

being there for better or for worse.

Rare Love that holds you tight,

even when

you struggle to be let go

forgetting, all of your pangs,

bad memories,

whatever sadden the mood

is now null and void...

no longer of existence in your life.

This very moment,

I stopped fighting, and learned

how to appreciate, not material things, but something...Real

L

o

v

e

 

the feeling

goes over and beyond the calls of duty

making sure that you are ok, by all means

a simple kiss, and "I Love You" stops the world

that has been created within me of hatred, and animosity.

A time when that special someone takes you by the hand

and lead you into a precious thought as

you began to dance to the tunes of the wind

I know that may sound funny, but it has happened

when you are loved in the most respectful way,

geniune and True

anything that surrounds you, becomes a magical moment

giggles, dreamy eyes, all in the same

a place of comfort that is Only for you...

my own little hideaway & finally...I get a break 

from a cold world that knows no boundaries when it comes to hurt

within you, we have become as one

as I break free from the shackles

I've had in my palace of thoughts for so long,

today...in this New Year

I realized that nothing else matters,

when you wake up and see...that what you needed, lies next to you

it's not an illusion,

as I touch your skin with the tips of my fingers & feel you breathe

while I lay my head upon your chest, & listen to your heart 

I knew then...that you were the one

as your soul called out to me,

soft as a feather

while I embraced this memory,

like a new born baby

to a mother's bosum and

then

I..whispered...

softly , that

I Love You too.

Author notes

It's 844am cst, January 1, 2008
and this is what came to mind.
Hope you enjoy as much as I did writting my True Feelings.

In a list

A contest entry

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

1 - 21 of 21
  • this was a damn great poem honey
    it was very well the best of the piffy brands you deserved the gold the contest giver was right to award this gold i liked it


  • Mackintoch
    April 19
    Edit | Reply
    You're trying to steal my trophy

  • Eclecta
    April 19
    Edit | Reply
    Great job. Best of Iuck.

  • pappacass
    April 16

    Edit | Reply

    wonderfully penned thoughts

    this is surely one of my favorites that you've written...it speaks from the soul....I'm gonna send you a quote in relevence to this...let me know what you think


    • Ephiphany gold member
      April 16
      Edit | Reply

      Ok, Shawn thank you

      I wanted to read this piece for one of my performances Thank you so much

      e

  • darell
    January 4

    Edit | Reply

    Bravo!

    Baby this was beautiful. I love the way you
    seem to reintroduce yourself to love again.
    Taking in all the little treasures that makes
    passion and romance so special. Many people
    look for the big things but its the small ones
    that really make the difference. This was an
    exquisitely intimate write with a lot of heart
    and soul put into it. Great work my love!


    • Ephiphany gold member
      January 4
      Edit | Reply

      thank you sweetheart

      I thought you read this already....well it doesn't matter, I'm just glad to see you
      I appreciate your support, always,
      Me♥

  • ennovy silver member
    January 2

    Edit | Reply

    Beautifully Penned God Daughter

    Deep deep thoughts to start the New Year, off in thankfulness, love, and faith; that life will go on in peace, love with a special someone the loves you just as you love them....Your reflection of the soul is in every word. Write ON!......novy

  • Arzab
    January 1

    Edit | Reply
    Such a beautiful, tender write, Sis. It makes me think that no matter what happens in life, that as long as people have love, that's what matters. Good luck in the contest.


  • Mykeee silver member
    January 1

    Edit | Reply
    Very emotional and romantic. I like how this is really speaks to appreciation. Not lust not unknown desire but a reflection of gratitude. Nicely done.

    Mykeee


    • Ephiphany gold member
      January 1
      Edit | Reply

      Thank you

      so glad you enjoyed this. I appreciate your comment.
      CC♥
  • So Very Pretty ~~~

    You have done such a lovely job,
    writing about your true feelings.
    I only hope, that you share this most
    precious piece of poet with your love one.
    You write of such a deep and powerful kind
    of love. I am happy to say that I can relate,
    I am blessed to feel this very same way.
    What a gift we were given.
    Your words are so tender and warming to the heart.
    Very beautiful, I am happy for you...

    Loveandblessings2u & yours always
    Joyce

    P.S. I pray that you always feel this kind of special love.

    • Ephiphany gold member
      January 1
      Edit | Reply

      Thank you Joyce

      my beautiful sister I always appreciate your support in my writing. So happy to hear that you have shared this like feeling, such a Wonderful Blessing that is. Keep the Faith and know I am here for you as well in your journey.
      Much love,
      ephiphany♥
  • Well this was heartfelt and riveting dear! One thing:

    You forget all of your pains, bad memories,

    Because of the context of the word, it should be corrected to "pangs" versus 'pains'.

    Also, when you wake up and see...that what you needed, lays next to you

    should be corrected to "lies" as we don't 'lay' hens do....and we both know who those are

    Great writing sis! Fantabulous dear.

    Keep penning!

    ~The Inc."


    • Ephiphany gold member
      January 1
      Edit | Reply

      LOL....

      I thought it would be PoeticTash first, but you got one up on the situation. Glad I have you two in corrections, I appreciate this, and has since then followed pursuit.
      Glad you enjoyed my 1st 2008 Poem

  • Ms Sexy silver member
    January 1

    Edit | Reply
    go girl you know it was tha bomb the feelings in this are so real. keep it up girl


    • Ephiphany gold member
      January 1
      Edit | Reply

      Thanks

      I appreciate your comments, always.
      ephiphany♥
1 - 21 of 21