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Heart Surge

Waves of emotion
Tides of hope
Save my devotion
Pride can't cope
Risk my heart
Before love dies
Play my part
Hear more cries
Beating drum
March as one
Soon to come
Then I run

Author notes

There is a lot at stake when we offer our heart to another. Who is deserving of such a gift

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  • Debbie Hansman
    January 1, 2008

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    "Risk my heart
    Before love dies"

    "Play my part
    Hear more cries"

    It seems we all take a chance when one gives their heart to another.

    Very well written

    Thank you for entering my contest and Good Luck

    debbie