What Now?
i ask myself everyday
its like a scratched record
what do i do when new years come
everyones looking for fun
to much to consider
rage deafning my consioucous
to much to consider
love blinding my judgement
so what do i do now
make a descion
choose a path
WHAT NOW
so many questions and i dont know the answer ok
lifes to come
why rush me now
just give me a guitar
and some lessons
i will sing a song to touch your heart
will always have a path
music to guide the way
souls are touched
stop asking the question and live your lif to the full
Author notes
not to good but oh well free versed
A contest entry
- NOW WHAT? by Dalaney.
1000 points, ended January 6, 2008, 16 entries
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Comments
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spell check and grammatical errors, but on the whole, a good solid piece for this contest, my friend. Thank you for entering. love, lane
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Aww... I love it! I'm still asking 'what now' and I'm twice your age!! (more actually lol). I guess we need to do what your last line says 'stop asking the question and live your life to the full'... good plan!!
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this is much better adds more paza to it lol
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hmm I actually really liked this the end end was a bit odd but this was good I liked it had a nice flow to it
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