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Taste of love

I tasted such deliciousness in love
the very minute I laid eyes on you.

Everything about you intrigued me.
I had to see you, know you more
and more.

I still remember our first kiss,
the nervous air but wanting it
to happen so badly.

Once I had a taste, I was hooked.

I cherish your giving and comforting
nature and I never question anything
you do. I trust our love and just
live the moment

                      with you.

Author notes

I selected the taste of love as the title and theme for my poem becuase it is honestly how I feel about my fiance' Matt.
Thank you for such great titles to pick from, I do love an excuse to write a love poem for my man

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  • Flying Phoenix
    June 17, 2008

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    This is a beautiful poem. I connected to it and I felt the love that went into it. Beautiful and well written. Good luck. Your a fantastic love poet.


  • CherryOnTop
    January 13, 2008
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    Girl this sizzles and you need no excuse!!!!!


  • Dark Whispers
    January 13, 2008

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    Beautifully written; I am consumed with jealousy, I want someone to love that much, Austrailians have all the big breaks

    LOL
    ~Dark


    • MaMa-2-be-Cindy
      January 13, 2008
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      Awwwww LOL, we do get some breaks lol.. I got a big one when I met my fiance' , he is indeed awesome


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    January 4, 2008

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    Very beautiful and heartfelt!
    Well done and thanks a lot
    for sharing this one here!




    Jeremy0826


  • FallenEngel
    January 2, 2008
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    nice

    thats really good and i know how it feels lol.
    great write here


  • Celticjedi
    January 1, 2008

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    And you should do it every chance you get! Great job on this dear, it is gorgeous and full of honesty and truth. I'm sure he'd love you more for this! Thank you for entering, keep it up, and happy new year!!!
    ~Cj


    • MaMa-2-be-Cindy
      January 1, 2008
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      Thank you, he did love me more for it
      I wish you all the best for 2008


      Cindy

  • A floatingleaf silver member
    January 1, 2008
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    A sweet and loving write...


  • pearl-dragon
    January 1, 2008

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    You've excelled here sweetness; he will love it.

    I trust our love and just live the moment with you

    A beautiful line expressing a thought that touches me deeply and one that I can so fully understand.

    My best wishes to you in the contest Baby Girl.

    Always
    Mum


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