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The Rain Leaves a Scar

When you cry into the night
And tears keep falling like acid rain
There is no one to hold you tight
It can cause all kinds of pain

It's like a puzzle with pieces missing
Like the dark circles beneath your eyes
And words once spoken with no one listening
Tears like raindrops falling from the skies

[CHORUS}
Uh-huh! Oh yeh! oh yeh! come on
Hearing voices singing out their pain
We are demanding and insisting
The rain leaves a scar on us again
And though we stopped dancing into the night
The rain leaves a scar on us again...

So much to speak of, so much to tell
I though our love would stand a chance
If love is heaven then I'm in hell
I must be crazy to think of this romance

We seemed to have so much time at hand
with new avenues for us to explore
But too soon it rained out what we had
And we were lost forever more

[CHORUS}
Uh-huh! Oh yeh! oh yeh! come on
Hearing voices singing out their pain
We are demanding and insisting
The rain leaves a scar on us again
And though we stopped dancing into the night
The rain leaves a scar on us again...

Author notes

I was inspired by the concept of water actually hurting you...

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  • Celticjedi
    January 1, 2008

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    *claps* Now THAT would make a good song. Hell, it's probably better than the song I got that title from! This is one of my favorite titles for that very concept, and you did an excellent job. Keep up the great work, thanks for entering and happy new year!!!
    ~Cj