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Fold Me Up and Cut Me Down (Butterfly Kisses)

Butterfly Kisses
dancing a dance,
of cliche love.
In a paper mache heart.
Made fragile,
ripped and torn,
full of scorn,
and tossed about,
a whisper in the wind.
Soft song,
sung in tune,
to slowly seduce
a healing heart.

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  • BeautifulCalamity08
    January 1, 2008

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    Totally love this darling! lol...fan-freaking-tastic! haha...so shall I guess who all these love poems are about? or are you just gonna tell me?


  • Tarja
    January 1, 2008

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    Although I have to say I did enjoy it... and to be honest it really did have originality! No reason to dumb it down with a title like that!