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On My Mind

Do you really
want to know
what is on my mind?
The dark things
I wish to do
to you now.
The pain it
gives me not
to do these
things to you.
To take you in
my grasp and
show you what
a real man is
really like.
To desicate
you on the
streets tonight.
To tear your
heart out and
give you mine.
To love you
like no other man
has before me.
To make you
moan as you
have an orgasim.
To scream
my name as
my manhood
goes deeper
into your body.
To make you
into what I
want you to
be for me.
To make me
happy with
all that life
has given me.
That is what
is On My Mind!!!

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  • Florida Sunshine
    February 24, 2008

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    LOL ~ OK ~ start to finish ~ you intrance me with your words ~ You did a terrific job!

    Thanks so much for entering the "Set the bar" contest ~ I do appreciate you sharing your work with me ~ Best of luck to you!

  • Nighttime angel
    January 13, 2008

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    I personally like this poem that you have written. you definitely got what was in your mind clearly heard. that is good.

    kat


  • brittany.geeze
    January 1, 2008
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    Oh goodness

    I dont know whether this is a really good poem or a really bad poem.