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I am so EXCITED!

I am so excited
I don’t know what to do
I’m on someone’s favorites list
Now that someone is two

Does this mean I am writing
Words that make some sense
Not just to me the hearer
But to ears that have been lent

To me for a few short moments
Just time enough to share
The heartfelt poems I like to write
The stories my heart does bear

Am I listening to the words
Flowing down from up above
Writing, feeling, and translating
Thoughts into love

I feel each time I read
Each time that I write or listen
That life is oh so wonderful
When I get to this position

My words upon a page
For many to come and see
Thank you to all who visit
My poems I hope you will read

Author notes

A home for my poems at last.  Thanks for reading my heart. (yes I meant to write heart.  that's what my and i suspect all poems are, a bit of our heart.)
Written November 6th, 2003

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  • Sameo
    January 13, 2004
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    Good write up.Should have been a greeting message.Nice work.Check out my poem"Birth of a poet".


  • leannewales
    November 13, 2003
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    awwww this is so lovely and shows just what a sweet person you are...it is indeed straight from your heart...a really lovely poem...hugs...leanne xxx