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The fruits of a practised hand
deep within the fragile cleft,
upon which when pressure applied,
brings tears
and sweat
and sighs.

Author notes

Something I threw together.

Short, but don't they say something like time flies when you're getting off?

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  • Mr-Nevers gold member
    January 2, 2008
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    Guilty knowledge?


  • Lord Merlynn
    January 2, 2008

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    oh, this is a hot piece, even for being short. Steamy. I like it, and thanks for sharing the link to this one with me.


  • LadyShiva
    January 1, 2008

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    Hot damn...er I mean...wew that was so hot and with so few words!! The images this brings to mind, well let's just say that I may have to take a cold shower after reading this one. Nicely done!!

    Lauren


  • arafura gold member
    January 1, 2008

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    wow...

    This is so sensual it burned a hole in my monitor... yet it is subtle as well. So much said in so few sweet words poet! Great stuff!

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