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Hollows

Hollows
gallows
hallowed
halls.

Saddened
sallow
swallows
all.

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Why not?

Short and sweet.

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  • Mr-Nevers gold member
    January 2, 2008
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    Io fei gibetto de le mei case.


  • arafura gold member
    January 1, 2008
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    swallows all...

    Short sharp and stark... I feel it poet!