Someone once asked me
if I believe in angels.
Vivid memories flooded my mind.
The time I first saw
true love and beauty
in a form that you
could embrace in a hug.
A radiance that brings
Peace and calmness
With the song of a dove.
The gentle touch
of hope
that brings healing
with a sweet feel.
A love so strong it can
Part the mountains
Just to spread one drop,
Filled my soul again.
When I was in a world of
solitude and sorrow a
bright face pulled me
out of the shadows.
A sturdy arm is always there
When my soul is troubled
And is a weary breath.
A strong faith that brings me
back from afar.
When I wander on a wrong
lonesome journey.
Yes, I believe.
Angels fill our dark world
With their peace, love, and beauty
And the best miracle of all
Is my angel, my mom.
Author notes
I wrote this for my mom for mother's day four years ago.
A contest entry
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She HAd To Love This...........
piece you penned for her!!! It is ful of amazing love between the two of you. But shows a mother's love to a tee.Thanks for entering this lovely rendition of a mother's love. The best of luck in my contest!!!~~Toni~~ -
Wow! This is beautiful, and perfect for my e-zine. You're on the finalists list. I like your style and your inspiring message. Well done! Thanks for entering~
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This is so beautiful--but i find it really hard to read with the backgroun--a beautiful background--maybe if you change the writing to black?
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It certainly had a rhythm but I didn't find it rhyming, but hey, maybe I'm wrong.
Options number please!
It said some beautiful things, your mother is very lucky to have you and thank you for the entry
Good Luck!
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Excellent
This is an excellent tribute to your Mom--and--Your Mom has a lot to be proud of for raising such fine daughter---We lost our Mom about 10 years ago---She was the center of the family and was well-loved by all who knew her---Read about her---Click the link below
http://allpoetry.com/poem/3861669
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