Last night I cried myself to sleep,
wondering Why this happened to me,
I hate to think of what I must do,
but I was once told,
it would be me or it would be you.
As I sit here and look at the print of your face,
I know your an angel that can't be replaced,
You have a brother and sister that I truly adore,
If it was just me I would choose you that's for sure,
Please remember the sound of my voice,
and know that I love you and had no choice.
Now, I know there is no life without pain,
I just pray to my god that he helps me stay sane.
A contest entry
- NOW WHAT? by Dalaney.
1000 points, ended January 6, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
This is my first poem.
Comments
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I feel so much after reading this...very raw and emotional pain here. Third stanza..."your" should be "you're or you are" and I do believe "god" should be capitalized. Thank you very much for this entry.
Love, Lane -
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