Suspended in dark midnight
Bathing in the moonlight
As dreams surround me in eternal slumber
Dancing deep inside of me
Are the remnants of past dreams
And in them wakes a new recurring wonder
Visions that remain untold
Waterfalls and caverns of gold
Are before me for my heart and soul to plunder
Yet silver locks are mine to bind
The orbs and shadows in my mind
To capture the enchantment I am under
Yes, maybe if I try for long
I think of how much time has gone
Since I sank into my dreams to wander
I see a face, one I know
Just a fleeting image, though
Just until they join me in this slumber
A contest entry
- Astral Dreams-Pic Prompt by Gypsie Ink.
600 points, ended January 9, 2008, 5 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Amazing
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Graceful!
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WOW.....
THIS IS BEAUTIFUL!
You paint such a wonderful image in words, so peaceful and magical.
I love everything about this poem,
KUDOS!
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that is so good! you write really well, i cant seem to manage to write anything half good
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This is really good Steph. I'm amazaed that you put it in a form. I like it a lot. I think you spelled recurring wrong. I don't think that's a word. I don't know what the real thing would be though. Awesome poem. Love you.
Alyssa
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