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Shame On

Under February stars
and universal scars
I remembered turquoise
and amethyst
was my birthday wish

I fought my closet of skeletons
and chewed the bones of sin again
I remember the ignition
of ignorance
and relevance

Marching in paradoxical sleep
and secrets I keep
in the whispered shadows
of endless chatter
do not matter

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  • Celticmoon
    January 12, 2008
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    I adore your first stanze and it's reference to both February and amethyst. I guess that is because it is personal to me. Over all i enjoyed reading this and it brought some wonderful images to mind. Thank you for entering. Best of luck to you!

    Blessings
    Bel


    • Corvidae
      January 14, 2008
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      Thanks for holding this contest and reading my work. I do appreciate it, Bel.

      And BTW~ February is very personal to me also.