You fill me with the deepest joy,
like a kid with a shiny new toy.
I haven't felt this good in a while,
this feeling is way more my style.
The pain that used to fill my soul,
made my heart as black as coal.
Now I'm filled with a peace and light,
that makes me soar to an unreached height.
I feel as though a weight's been lifted,
now I know I'm truly gifted.
I hope this feeling never goes away,
I want to keep in until my final day.
What you brought out of me I thought had died,
but you turned out to be my soul's faithful guide.
I love you more than anyone alive,
and so, for you, I'll never deprive.
I want to spend the rest of my life with you,
because our love is the truest of true.
A contest entry
- Contest for many types of poems, Prewrites allowed. by Systems Malfunction.
500 points, ended January 30, 2008, 46 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - ~Looking for my Unfound Prince Charming?~ by Sweetangelgrace.
600 points, ended January 6, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Two thumbs up!
Your poem is just mind blowing.
very romantic, very SWEET...eeehhhhhhhhh!!! You really told how you felt and thats the way it should be.You have expressed the feelings so precisely.
I appreciate a poet that knows how to write about love. Excellent work!!!
GRACE
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Wow
I loved the day that I realized that I felt this way about who now is my wife. it's such a great feeling. Everything from the past that had built up, melted away, as I became more and more sure that she felt exactly the same way for me as I did for her. It is a fantastic feeling, and I think that you have written about it hear fantastically. Excellent work!
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