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My friends

My friends and I all have fun,

My friends and I are all content with the pals,

they have come to know.

 

they come and tell me all the things,

they have troubles with,

 

but though I am me,

and I have enemies,

I have no care for the enemies.

 

I have great care for all my friends,

and never will I stop,

 

though never, never, never, never, never will i forget the friends I knew,

in the life as a human.

 

 

The most content in life will not,

forget this poems.

 

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This poem is a very touching story.

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  • Periwinkle Blue
    December 31, 2007

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    I do get it because friends are important.

    A fine poem with a message I appreciate. Your poem does not need so many commas... At the end of each line, you do not necessarily need punctuation. For instance, the last two lines do not need a comma separating them. And your last word does not need an "s." Should just be "poem."

    Now don't fret about my suggestions. Contest hosts are supposed to do this, to show they care.