Warm beats melt my heart
As I let my body move
The beat of my heart
Can get into the groove.
My hands touched the surface
And immediately it felt right
It was my heart, my soul
It was the sun in my light.
Why is it I feel so special
To beat the sticks to the drum
I felt my body jolt inwards
And knew that it's the one.
It's not so wrong to feel it's beat
If it's already a part of me
My drums: I'll never let go
The beat of my heart it will be.
Author notes
I'm actually a guitar person, but drums do good to me too... Option one.
A contest entry
- #5 OPTIONS CONTEST (: by Walk-Free.
700 points, ended January 3, 2008, 11 entries
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Comments
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Thanks for this entry!
You're the first one who dared to write on this option
Although I was looking for more imagery, this was altogether good.
"DRUMS DO GOOD TO ME TOO"? Do you play the drums as well?~
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I tried in my band practice, and I liked the feel of it. I only tried a few times
on a can! But it sounded good to me lol
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Beautiful, I love the beat of music. The perfect rythem.....Wonderful.
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Thanks
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