Running far away from despair
As fast as my legs could take me
I wondered does this really mean
Nothing to you at all
You're just an image I can't forget.
Sometimes tears could fall so softly
Opening my heart to sorrow.
Rainy days, when do you stop?
Right when I start laughing?
Oh how I wish people could understand
Words hurt as much as You.
Author notes
Option 5. My first acrostic ^.^ You might notice I used "Rainy Sorrow" instead... I hope that works! otherwise just use the first stanza. Thank you!
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Comments
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A brilliant write.
The flow was good and yea, this wasn't bad at all for your first try
"Rainy days, when do you stop?
Right when I start laughing?
Oh how I wish people could understand
Words hurt as much as You."
I love this
thanks and good luck!
~THEGREATESTLOVE
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Yes yes yes xD I loved that part too ^.^ thanksss
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