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A Fight Of Realazation

Realization comes with a price.
So many times will you have to fight,
To see beyond the wall of shawdows
and into the world of light.

Scars of battle will be left behind,
people unknown will come by your side
and help you fight,
to find your own light.

This battle happens to everyone,
at least once in their life,
as the plan is cunning
and very well deivsed.

Sometimes this battle is fought more than twice,
when someone loses their way,
and lost their own light.
So let this help guide you through the think and then,
and then maybe, in battle, will we meet again.

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  • Melodies
    January 11, 2008

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    Uuuuuuummmmmmmmmmmmm!!! What thinking here! I am so impressed by this poem… made me really appreciate your talent. The imagery here is so fine! A poem that makes the reader think and admire. Smart and clever, most certainly.


  • DeLiShDaNcEr
    January 8, 2008
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    UHHH...........

    toitle????