Falling into such loving hands,
now trying hard to understand.
What do I do wrapped up so tight,
who will hold me this darkened night?
Where is that place so warm and snug,
that disappeared with push and tug.
How did I get here, I forget,
why do I suddenly feel wet?
What are these strange shadows I see,
always hovering over me?
Author notes
10 Beautiful lines of amazement.
But there is a CATCH. You have to write a poem on Year 2008 as a one day new born baby. The picture also of a ONE DAY NEW BORN BABY. Present your felicitations just like a new life born on this mother earth to rejuvenate the 365 days of beautiful hopes.
In a list
A contest entry
- 9th Contest by Spiritualangel..HAPPY NEW YEAR 2008..15x10 again..No PIF by spiritualangel.
550 points, ended January 14, 11 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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What do I do wrapped up so tight,
who will hold me this darkened night?
Where is that place so warm and snug,
that disappeared with push and tug.
Yes, its true. Best of luck -
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Thank you my friend. I appreciate the lovely comment. Thank you again for the Bronze!!! Take care, Sandy
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you are an amazing writer
perfect timing. happy new year to you.... brilliant lines...powerful message
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Thank you for the lovely comment. You take care, Sandy
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Thank you for stopping by and leaving such a nice comment. I appreciate your encouragement. Bless you, Sandy
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This is a beautiful write - I feel so baby all over! Birth brings hope, and human feelings as well. Best of all that this loving, kind, and hopeful to you for 2008. God bless. Frans
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Hello Frans, Always a pleasure to start the New Year off with a lovely comment from you my friend. Thank you so much for stopping by. Blessings to you and yours. Sandy
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Precious
wow Sandy this is really so very precious writing, you've captured the innocent confusion of one day born tiny little miracle
- such beautiful words, don't know what's more beautiful your emotions and feelings or the poem... it sure made me smile and oh Gawd I need that so very much. you know hun you don't need good luck with such a beautiful poem with perfect flow and rhyming scheme, but still here it is - good luck in the contest 
-- take care Minoo
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Thank you for stopping by my friend. I always enjoty reading your lovely and thoughtful comments. I hope you are enjoying the New Year. Take care, Sandy
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This is beautiful and if you ever wanted to melt my heart this was the poem to do it! Love your background, and wish you best in the contest
may you have a beautiful Happy New Year~ blessings always ~Trisha~
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Good Morning Trishsa, Thank you for this lovely comment. I appreciate you stopping by. Hope you are enjoying this New Year my friend. You take care. Blessings to you. Sandy
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this is such a beautiful and powerfully penned write and i love the way you have wrtitten it. wel done and best of luck
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Always a pleasure to read your comments. You take care and I hope this New Year is a Happy and Blessed one. Sandy
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