Flowing ocean, full of grace
sand beneath, keeping pace
with the beat of the drum nearby,
feeling like the deep blue sky.
Calm repose and gentle heat
I follow you, but discreet.
Holding hands on this day
I love you, any way.
Sun setting across the sea
feeling my heart is setting free
full of emotion, I know one thing:
this is how it's supposed to be.
A contest entry
- If It Makes You Happy. by La Tua Cantante.
380 points, ended January 2, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Astonishing poem. It has such a wonderful flow and rhyme! My favorite part is:
"Calm repose and gentle heat
I follow you, but discreet.
Holding hands on this day
I love you, any way."
I could visualize this poem well. I can see the happiness flowing out of it. Wonderful all around, there isn't any bad places in it.
Thank you and good luck in my contest.
-Dana
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