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Death

Nobody listens, Nobody understands
This pain won't stop, This pain can't stop
Why must you put me threw this
Why me, Why me
Why am I to be the chosen one
what have I done to upset
How can I change
How can I make it change
Please tell me now
Before it's too late
My breath is getting farther and farther apart
My heart is racing now
Is this how death feels
Is this how it goes
If its really my time to go ,
Will you listen to my last wish
I regret nothing in my life, did everything my own way
Life goes a certain way, and this is how mine is
Nothing to change this
Whether i lose my life today, apart of me is still dead
Never coming back to me, but I ask you now to listen
Listen to my tears, flowing from my heart
My broken heart
A heart you broke with time
With every single beating
I only wish that I'm the last to go
That children everywhere will live a good life
Without this kind of pain
Let me be the last to go and I shall go in peace
After harming me so much, After seeing my pain
After watching my painful death
Will you save the others from it
Save the others form the harm
from the pain
Save others from the DEATH

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  • icefire
    March 10, 2004
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    Wow! This gave me a shiver down my spine, this is one great poem.
    Lewis

  • brownfox
    November 6, 2003
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    I was afraid to read this when i seen the title. abuse to children just saddens me so much. this poem touched my heart.