Love fills my heart with joy
It fills me with a warm sensation
My heart pounds and my mind releases
Nothing matters anymore just the moment
And then as he leaves I stare off
Wishing he would return
But there will be other days
And other oppertunites
Love is wonderful
A contest entry
- If It Makes You Happy. by La Tua Cantante.
380 points, ended January 2, 2008, 16 entries
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This is very short and sweet, but it describes the feeling of love so perfectly. This is how I feel about a guy right now, so I can really relate with it. My favorite part is:
"Love fills my heart with joy
It fills me with a warm sensation
My heart pounds and my mind releases"
I absoluely love it.
Thank you and good luck in my contest.
-Dana.
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