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[ Whats with these Cowboys? ]

Whats with these Cowboys?
They try to show us Cowgirls up, but does it work? I don't think so
They try to impress us, bein the best,but does it work? I don't think so
They try to act so tough with their spurs and boots and ropes and wranglers
That don't matter though, us cowgirls have em' too
Whats with these Cowboys?
Their rowdy and wild and rough and tough
But does that impress us Cowgirls?
No
But when it comes to lovin...
They just might steal our hearts.

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It's my first poem it's not that good but I will get there

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  • Betting Roses
    January 2, 2008

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    HAH! Yea you go gurl.... have u met old Jake yet? he's bout ur age he might change ur mind bout them cowboys...lol I know Bobby changed mine. NEVER let em beat ya lol. try yer damndest not at least. You know why they don't let the gurls in rodeo? cuz we beat em for so long they kicked us out lol... teh old school gurls used to beat up on the boys so them cowboys decided tehy should'nt be allowed in there. lol...


  • mistymoonlight
    December 31, 2007

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    I like it alot. It has a good message. Me being a girl too, I know a couple things about the theme of this poem. Trust me I know.(wink)