All the
Kings horses
and all the
Kings men
couldn't
repair her,
he
did with
super glueand
~I care.
In a list
A contest entry
- Thanks for your kindness by Gypsy-Princess.
450 points, ended December 31, 2007, 9 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Short, sweet, and to the point. Thought short, it packs a punch. Thats always hard to do. Congrats on the trophy. Great write. [:
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Wow, stacked to kill, this is. Love the poem and the appearance-both great
lol
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interesting... probably just the way I read it, but at first "I Care" seemed like your response to the repair, and it was cynical... now I see otherwise... I shall return to comment further...
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OMG!
I love, love, love this poem sis!
damn...you are good! LOL
he did with super glue and...I care...
AWESOME line beautiful lady...VERY WELL DONE!
I'm shocked this didn't take gold...but congrats on the bronze...
excellent poetry and the brevity only adds to the impact...
THIS is why I love you! you are BRILLIANT...
sis
xoxox
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Aww that's nice, I'm sure she's really flattered and honoured that you care, I know that I would be in her situation. I love this one, it's a nice twist on the rhyme and yeah, you are a caring person to put her back together again, not many people would have the care and dedication to do so.
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lol how cute this is...love the super glue...guess that was a cure and solution we did not think of...congrates on this wonderful fun poem girl....
for you
Mal
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congrats my dear Sis on the bronze kindness and friendship i have found have held me together in times when i thought wasnt worrth being repaired and my dearest friends showed me through super strength and hold differently that i hadnt thoguth. sorry for rambling but it fit so well with your write xxx many loving blessings always xxx
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This is wonderful sweetheart. Some eggs gotta be cracked and we have our share of them rattling around inside lol. A drop or two in just the right places can mend the weave and love can do the rest. Very well done and very moving. This looks golden to me, just like you.
Love,
Mouser
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This is totally unique and very attention grabbing. I like where you've gone with this one... Thanks ever so much for sharing... x Love and light, Lavender Butterfly.
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wonderful! Love is strong
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just a word
BEAUTIFUL
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shattered life and putting back the pieces
this was what i got from this poem
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