You have this secret hold on me
This invisible vice clasped tightly to my arm
Holding me pinned to the floor with your guilt.
And you hold me taunt with your silence
Stretched easily over each monumental mistake
Grasped tightly to the ghosts of the past
But thats over.
With each ripple comes a break in your brilliance
And the longer you hold out, the more you give in
What I thought could be salvaged lays in ruins
SO its time to give up and walk away.
You have nothing on me anymore.
Author notes
How funny it is to see everything restraining you finally set you free without even realizing how obvious the move had been. This was written when I couldn't sleep at 6 in the morning so take it how you will.
Please tell me what you think honestly
Comments
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brilliant write! stunning imagery! >.<
With each ripple comes a break in your brilliance
And the longer you hold out, the more you give in
magnificent lines! great job and keep penning kays! >.<
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This sounds like a poem of realization to me, like you're going to be even stronger than you were originally.
And you seem strong as is.
Hey, have a good day.
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