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Rock Bottom

dead weight dangling o'er the cliff
hands slipping, sweating
mind racing ever so quickly.
[God save me, tell me how I deserve this]

nerves taking over
losing my grip
as I begin to fall and meet my fate.

when did I hit rock bottom....

whatchu think? :D

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  • velveteen
    January 25, 2008
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    aw, this sounds sad, but I hope you're okay now?

    I really like it though. (: