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Uniform Individualism

I will

obtain demassification,
by a

refusal of classification,
A true 

homo sapien genius, 
I will be

free of the homogeneous,

With my  voice

of the idiosyncratic,

being  heard  by 

the masses of idolizers idiotic, 

Everyone,

will finally know, 
how fucking cool I am.

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  • DrunkenRam
    February 2, 2008

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    Aside from being misspelled, this is a great Title.
    I like the Punkish Rudisms, this is a proud statement poem, I like it.

    Individualism You forgot the "a"


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    January 10, 2008

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    Now this is very original! The last line rocks, lol. Great take on the prompt. Thank you for entering and good luck!


  • Gay-Militant
    January 10, 2008
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    I love the last line! that made me giggle. nice job. I may just check your other woks too.


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    January 6, 2008

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    this is a wonderful write and it flows beautifull of the page. well done and best of luck in the contest


  • grassisgreener
    January 1, 2008

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    the flow is great, punk to the point, although i'm not too sure about the last line. you've got a lot of great stuff to work with here though!


  • DogTagz-TheJalapeno
    December 31, 2007

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    wow that was cute and very good.good luck on the contest

    PS~PUT YOUR FREAKING OPTION IN YOUR NOTES SO I DONT HAVE TO DQ YOU!



  • infinitechaos07
    December 31, 2007

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    Hmm, idk what to say here... I like your use of terminology and flow but it kinda makes you seem conceited. Thanks for entering my contest and good luck!

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