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sounds of silence

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I lay among shadows


thirsting for your time ~


You turn away


blocking the sounds of silence


that bleed from my soul....


I'll remain ~


wasted...

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picture credit: pixie-child [from deviantart.com]

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  • adsaige
    January 13, 2008

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    Judged

    Wasted, thrown away.

    he finds joy and amusement
    in your idly and
    uncharacteristic behavior.

    thank you and good luck.


  • Sandra R Reynolds gold member
    December 31, 2007
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    Good write with imagery