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True Embrace

The dream of two lips entwined
Creating passion strong as fire
Connected in this warm embrace
Delighting in such sweet desire

Wandering hands will explore
As decadent lips have their taste
Each heart races more and more
While arms enclose around her waist

Both willing to take the risk
Exposing themselves to one another
The look of love upon their faces
Proving there could be no other

One could look and never see
Just why two souls were meant to be
But nothing else may take its place
The serenity of true embrace

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  • scorpio rising
    February 21, 2008

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    "One could look and never see
    Just why two souls were meant to be
    But nothing else may take its place
    The serenity of true embrace"

    OH SHIT this is beautiful!!!!!


    What do you mean you wanna write like me

    This is awesome...I love it...truly do

    I don't know what else to say

    These words are perfect!


    Sensual and romantic



    Keep them comin!!!


    Much Love!!!!!!!!!!!


    • Twilight4Eternity
      February 21, 2008
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      Thank you so much, and you're the first to comment on this poem. It was inspired by a perfume believe it or not.