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Indian Ocean's Edge

Water's edge wavelets,
                                advancing,
receding,
            frothing,
                        bubbling,
                                    advancing.
Receding and rippling,
                                rippling,
                                          rippling sodden sand.
Exposing and covering,
                                exposing and covering
a carpet of shells.

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  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    December 31, 2007
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    I loove water.
    in general, but the sea is beautiful though I don't like my feet getting into it.
    I like bubbles...I like the heat of the water.
    I love jacuzzis, baths and swimming pools.
    I just low the feeling of the water between my fingertips it's nice.
    great write, very expressive.