Tomorrow when sun sleeps again
having met to appear on the window:
flowers of your name takes myself,
will do with your smile …sweet morning !
Author notes
25 words
A contest entry
- 25 Words Or Less - Prewrites Allowed!!! by xxRainbowDawnxx.
450 points, ended January 2, 2008, 52 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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lovely and romantic!
I like your style, it flows gently and makes me think happy thoughts about the world, which is a strange oddity at the moment! -
Very good.




