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suicide is painless

This suicide was painless
Thats all that I can say
I dont know what else to tell you
Or if you want to hear it anyway
Sarah took slow poison
MAtthew used a knife
But unlike them I felt no pain
At the ending of my life

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NO, FOR THE LOVE OF ALL THAT IS CONSIDERED HOLY, I DO NOT HAVE A DEATH WISH!!!

please say SOMETHING

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  • Andiness
    February 13

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    Woah....got it, you don't have a death wish *Takes two steps backwards*, lol!

    I like the butterfly background, it was cool, you know. Putting butterflies next to suicide, the contrast was amazing!!
    -Andi


    • Violet Hawthorne
      March 17
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      XDD Thankies!! Don't worry, I just read this at school once and I got sent to the school shrink....urgh sooo annoying trying to convinve them, but that was awhile back!


  • boostheword
    January 7, 2008
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    I love it its really sad


  • XxxSammixxX
    December 31, 2007
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    loved it!
    continue writing!


  • raggyann
    December 31, 2007

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    wow this was a a sad poem
    all hurting theirselves or killing theirselves
    this had a images and more images
    this was realy very good

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