Little girl, sit and pose
We'll paint the side of you
We want the world to know
We won't paint what's in your heart
Or who you really are
We'll just paintwhat we want to see
And damn the rest to dark
Author notes
"Men have died and worms have eaten them, but not for love"
William Shakespeare
I just felt like adding that
please say SOMETHING
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I think this was a rather short but rather lovely poem. Greatly enjoyed reading it keep up the good work.
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I've heard that quote before. And I do love it, but I think I'd be willing to give almost anything for love. I know for the right person I would give my life.
And, as shakespeare says, men have died for things other then love.....but they have also died FOR love
Your poem was wonderful, I almost laughed at the background choice. You wowed me again.
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I'm glad I had the effect on you! Yeah, I was just feeling random on the background.
I'm not sure what I would do for love. I mean I've got a boyfriend right now and I really do love him, I'd give him anything if he asked. I know of a thousand waysto interpret that quote, but I just like shakespeare so yeah!
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most interesting writing here. you say lots about how we all are. everyone sees only what he/she wants to and the heck with the rest. perhaps we should go into the dark and see what is there .
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Excellent! The last two lines are especially strong. Did tw0 words run together in the next to last line? Well done!
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I love it.
that is so very true
on how our socitey works today.
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wow this is realy something
but its the truth
and i like that alot
your real and thats a plus in my book
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