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Tears of an Angel

Beautiful ashen face
Piercing eyes of blue
Raven hair that glistens
Under pale silver moons
You walk upon A breeze
Touching each And every soul
And from your rose kissed lips
You speak A tragic tale
"No where do I belong
And no where shall I find
Lost to wander the earth
Alone for all time..."
In the moonlight
Under the old willow tree
Your broken spirit cries
Beside the creek
A fallen angel
An image of beauty and grace
Fragile broken wings
Tear stained face
"Who could ever accept me,
Or take me In loves embrace
Who would ever want me
An angel of Disgrace"

Author notes

I had written this in march of 05' on an old account. I thought maybe I should re-present it to the AP world.

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  • SummerlandRayne gold member
    February 4, 2008
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    How tragically beautiful! Such a deep dark emotional write...I loved it!

    Blessings~
    Az


  • honorable mention
    December 31, 2007
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    very well written babe


  • micol
    December 31, 2007

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    Excellent and beautiful. This has all of the visual lyricism of a painted screen or a silk tapestry. You do this beautifully.