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One Step At A Time

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So high, it seems
to reach our dreams
We climb the stairs
to where we dare

and follow through
just me and you
our love a guide
and us, side by side

So, take my hand
as we make a stand
and head to the top
and never, do we stop

It's a struggle at times
to reach the finish line
but we must not turn back
or ever get off track

When we get to the end
with a kiss and a grin
I will take you as my wife
and we will begin our life

We will be one, no longer two
all the struggles we went through
will be worth it all, my dear
when our Wedding day is near...


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  • Broken Machine
    January 2, 2008
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    Aww! This is beautiful! I love this poem! Congratulations on the trophy! ( =


  • PureRomance
    December 31, 2007

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    Wow! This poem is truly amazing and it has left me almost speechless. I can relate to this poem so strongly with the love of my life & soulmate. You did an excellent job with this contest entry. I hope you win a trophy for this because it truly deserves it. God bless you in all that you do & write. Keep up the wonderful work and best wishes my fellow poetic friend to you & your poem in the contest. I hope you have a Happy New Year!


  • walkinthereign
    December 31, 2007

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    Wow!

    This piece is beautiful. It is a very different take on the prompt. The staircase paralled with a marriage. Like walking up a staircase, maintaining a healthy relationship is a lot of work but it is so worth it in the end.

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    December 31, 2007

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    This is a really good piece sweety I wish you luck in the contest looking at the stairs made me quesy haha I am so scared of heights lol much love