The Whirpool winked at me
And showed her beauteous curves
Bewitched I moved to her
She sucked me fast and deep
...It was a dream-cum-true!
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Wow clever that is for sure and paints a picture very very good!
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sounds like a dream cum true, i would love to be part of your next hot tub party .... keep up the wonderful writing, -Amy ♥
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i bet it was a dream come true this was very much you and loaded with erotic i wonder what else is on your mind
take care
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What else is in my mind?
I don't want to make it public, my love!
Get closer.
I'd whisper it in your ear.
Kisses + Love
Galaxy2
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UMMMMMMMMMM
WOW
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Thank you, dear!
Galaxy2
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wow it is great
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Hmmm...Leaves me to wonder and imagine.I love that in a good poem.
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ha ah, dream-cum-true... nice one.
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Yea...the middle part is the nicest, isn't it?
Kisses!
Galaxy2
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WOW...... short but a lot said, I like this. I'm off to read some more.
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Read me in between the lines, honey!
Galaxy2
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Tooooooooooooooooo short!
But very well done. Love how much is left to the readers imagination...can see it now.
**Master Ktulu**
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My readers are imaginatively overdeloped!
They see 'deep' inside me....lol
Galaxy2
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oooooo, short and sweet indeed, such intince words with litthe to be said, yet leavs much to be seen within the imigination....
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Your power of imagination is amazing...I meant all those things which you imagined...my love!
Thanks + Kissesss!
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Forgot
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You also forgot to kiss me...
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LOL
This was great, I had no idea is would be so cute when I clicked on it. I have a whirpool
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wow
love the dream....to nice
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It was not a dream ... it was a dream-cum-true...lol
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Short sweet and HOT!!!! Damn....Now I want a whirlpool of my own!!!!
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Are visitors allowed, hottie?...lol
Your comment has been appreciated.
Galaxy2
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LOL... "a dream cum true" - Bravo on originality and knowing when to use a good pun!
I love not only your erotic nature, but your sense of humor.
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can I join you in the whirlpool? I love the words and imagery as always............xo
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Yet again a wonderful choice of words. Short and sweet but very nicely done.
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Short and sweet!! Sometimes that's all you need!
Good writing again!
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But not as sweet as you are, dearie!...lol...
Thanks 4 the comment. It helps.
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