when all seams lost
and the world around me is collapsing
my thoughts pull me threw
the hardest of times
have no chance
when i have my thoughts
even ones of lost love
even ones of hate and pain
pain and endless what if's
hold no candle to the never-ending joy
of knowing I am me
and that will never be lost
the lack of control that grips
my heart and mind
they will never control me
the emotions i feel may be bleak
and may drive me to do
that which i know is easiest
but even that wont control me
even that wont be the only choice
the world is pretty fucked up
but one thing will always
be steady
the fact that me is me and i
cannot be controlled
will not be controlled
Please tell me what you think
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great
sometimes when you think people are controlling you they are just trying to help you but on my hand my parents control me quite a bit until the other night wehn i finally told them that i was an adult and that i was going to spend new years eve with my fiance thats control. anyway nice write keep up the good work and check out my poem i'm about to post it sucks i know but i've lost my muse. but yet i sill try to write every once in a while.
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