So you want to be impressed?
Want me to dance like the rest?
Sorry sweetie I just cant abide,
I roll with a different tide...
Cant lie and act like its cool,
I'm a guy sweetie, minds made of stool...
So you want to be impressed?
Want me to dance like the rest?
Look Id love to muse you with romantics,
But face it they are just antics...
Sweet little lies we've perfected,
To help get a mood erected...
So you want to be impressed?
Want me to dance like the rest?
Cause bottom line boils down to;
We just want to get inside of you,
Or her or her or maybe even him...
Just depends on the mood we're in...
So you want to be impressed?
Want me to dance like the rest?
Sorry sweetie I just cant abide,
I roll with a different;
honest,
hard headed,
tide...
Cause lord knows I can't lie...
and I don't want to be cool,
after all I'm just another guy
with a mind full of stool...
Author notes
Well you wanted something to impress you, not sure if this is what you were looking for, but this is the first thing that popped into my head when I read the topic. My thanks to you sweetie for breaking my writters block, been a long time sence I wrote anything out... Hope you enjoy
VS
A contest entry
- [GUYS ONLY] Impress Me by Sesheta.
630 points, ended March 30, 2008, 52 entries
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Comments
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I'm Impressed
I like this ALOT! You come straight out and honest, just like you say in your poem. Shit man, canI find a man like you who tell's it straight up?
"Cause bottom line boils down to;
We just want to get inside of you,
Or her or her or maybe even him...
Just depends on the mood we're in..."
That way I don't have to wonder what it will never turn out to be with false hope.
I'm tottally diggin' this piece alot!
great write!
exOHex
Brea
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AWESOME
THAT WAS WICKED MAN
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