Sweet venom sported,
Lips exposing dryness.
Infused hatred spreading,
Muscles a tightened mess.
Evilness shapes the corners.
Death creeps up my spine.*
Misery is my company,
Erasing images of you, the bottom line.
Startled by the poisons explosion,
Slimed lips now tainted by your acidity corrosion.
Author notes
parched lips (acrostic: Slimed Mess)
Be inspired 3-10 lines -center aligned -single spaced [e.g. please be nice to others] -no bashing -no sticky types
(Love you Baby)
A contest entry
- parched lips by adsaige.
300 points, ended January 13, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Thank you for your entry into my cotest and goodluck. It is amazing well written and such beautiful imagery. Even if you do not win, I wish you all the luck. -
Very nicely written honey. You have done a fine job on this one. You do go where no one has gone before with these prompts..lol Love you baby...Scott
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Massively entertaining. You are good.
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this is a powerful write and it holds so much within your words. well done mom and best of luck in the contest
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This is differnt but it is good I thnk you deserve an extra bunny for this
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