this morning,
I watched the sun
mercilessly di
s
s
o
l
v
e
an icicle.
Author notes
10 words.
In a list
A contest entry
- Quickie... by Gypsy-Princess.
450 points, ended December 30, 2007, 11 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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huh.. crazy...lol.. I liked it. simple enough for me to understand I would think..lol.. Well done brother mine!
Jetleena
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hahahaha wow!
i love the way you drizzeled dissolve, it's awesome, and this is such a cute poem too, good job on the hm!
great write =)
stephanie
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LOVE IT!
Love the form, the simplicity and brevity (yet it's so complex if you think about it).
Amazing write!
You get better every day!!!!
Excellent use of diction, my friend.
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The sun. Going about his business. Caught in the act. Way to go.
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Wow, it's hard to read this and not feel a bit sorry
for the icicle.
Isn't it amazing how one word adds a punch to the delivery?
Your one word is :" mercilessly"
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Lovely!
Short and beautifully written. Congratulations on your honorable mention.
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really nice
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mercilessly....cool!
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What wonderful imagery this brings... Thanks ever so much for sharing... x Love and light, Lavender Butterfly.
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Interesting form.
Nicely done.
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Very good, and creative. Shows nice imagination.
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well done here my freind. enjoyed this piece. alot said in such few words.
best wishes to you in the contest.
Tory
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Thanks hon.
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