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Alluding Love

I'm looking for love but it escapes my grasp

It seems each time I find it, it just flies right past

I search high and low, I look all around

But I always miss the place where true love is found




Every time I find it, SNAP!! It disappears

And living without love is one of my biggest fears

It alludes my soul and terminates my mind

I'll never find love, no matter how hard I try




My heart has shattered into many small pieces

And it just won't heal, no matter how much I plead it

I'll lock the door to my heart, and I'll throw away the key

Because love no longer matters, at least not to me




I was wrong, I lied, love can't be fought

It travels my mind and consumes my thoughts

I wish it would stop, and just end this pain

Because love is the hardest and most hurtful game



Now that I think about it, I've realized

That nobody could love me as I begin to cry

I rest my head and close my eyes

And I weep silently until I die

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  • dreamersalwayslive
    December 30, 2007

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    This is very sad.

    The emotion was bruoght out very well. This is quite wonderful. I love the third stanza! Keep writing!

    By the way, periods should probably be placed here and there!


  • walkinthereign
    December 30, 2007
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    this poem is so so sad

    What a painful ending,

    "I rest my head and close my eyes
    And I weep silently until I die"

    Although I do know how you feel. Looking for love is a painful. I do believe though when the time is right you will find it! And sometimes we look prettiest when we cry!